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revno: 421
committer: Lars Helge Overland <larshelge@xxxxxxxxx>
branch nick: dhis2-docbook-docs
timestamp: Wed 2011-11-30 10:02:29 +0100
message:
  Minor fixes
modified:
  src/docbkx/en/dhis2_user_man_using_data_visualizer.xml


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=== modified file 'src/docbkx/en/dhis2_user_man_using_data_visualizer.xml'
--- src/docbkx/en/dhis2_user_man_using_data_visualizer.xml	2011-11-26 20:50:19 +0000
+++ src/docbkx/en/dhis2_user_man_using_data_visualizer.xml	2011-11-30 09:02:29 +0000
@@ -16,7 +16,7 @@
         <para>Click &quot;Update&quot; in the top bar and see the chart unfold.</para>
       </listitem>
     </orderedlist>
-    <para>The data visualizer is designed firstly to be easy-to-use - you can simply select the indicators, data elements, periods and organisation units you want to include and click &quot;Update&quot; to get your visualization. Secondly its designed  to be fast and work well over poor Internet connections - charts are generated in the web browser and very little data is transferred over the Internet.</para>
+    <para>The data visualizer is designed firstly to be easy-to-use - you can simply select the indicators, data elements, periods and organisation units you want to include and click &quot;Update&quot; to get your visualization. Secondly it is designed  to be fast and work well over poor Internet connections - charts are generated in the web browser and very little data is transferred over the Internet.</para>
     <screenshot>
       <screeninfo>Data visualizer module displaying a column chart.</screeninfo>
       <mediaobject>
@@ -85,7 +85,7 @@
         <para>Categories: A category is a set of elements (eg. indicators or organisation units) for which you want to compare its data.</para>
       </listitem>
       <listitem>
-        <para>Filter: Since most charts are two-dimensional, a filter must be used on the third dimension  use only a single element  in order to produce a create meaningful chart.</para>
+        <para>Filter: Since most charts are two-dimensional, a filter must be used on the third dimension  in order to use only a single element for the chart to become meaningful.</para>
       </listitem>
     </orderedlist>
   </section>
@@ -104,7 +104,7 @@
   </section>
   <section id="dvDisplayChart">
     <title>Displaying a chart</title>
-    <para>You can display a chart based on your selections simply by clicking the &quot;Update&quot; button on the top centre menu. This requires that you have selected one more elements from all of the three dimensions - data, periods and organisation units. Note that &quot;Months this year&quot; from the period dimension and the root organisation unit is selected by default.</para>
+    <para>You can display a chart based on your selections simply by clicking the &quot;Update&quot; button on the top centre menu. This requires that you have selected one or more elements from all of the three dimensions - data, periods and organisation units. Note that &quot;Months this year&quot; from the period dimension and the root organisation unit are selected by default.</para>
     <para>Notice that you can hide and show individual data series in the chart by clicking directly on the series label in the chart - they appear either at the top or at the left of the chart.</para>
     <para>If you want to give the chart more space on your screen you can click on the triple-arrow button on the top centre menu. This will collapse the left side menu. You can get this menu back by clicking on the same button again.</para>
   </section>