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revno: 667
committer: Lars Helge Øverland <larshelge@xxxxxxxxx>
branch nick: dhis2-docbook-docs
timestamp: Thu 2013-03-07 13:15:12 +0100
message:
  Fixed typos
modified:
  src/docbkx/en/dhis2_user_man_persons_and_programs.xml


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=== modified file 'src/docbkx/en/dhis2_user_man_persons_and_programs.xml'
--- src/docbkx/en/dhis2_user_man_persons_and_programs.xml	2013-03-06 07:33:52 +0000
+++ src/docbkx/en/dhis2_user_man_persons_and_programs.xml	2013-03-07 12:15:12 +0000
@@ -1,12 +1,16 @@
 <?xml version='1.0' encoding='UTF-8'?>
 <!-- This document was created with Syntext Serna Free. --><!DOCTYPE book PUBLIC "-//OASIS//DTD DocBook XML V4.4//EN" "http://www.oasis-open.org/docbook/xml/4.4/docbookx.dtd"; []>
 <chapter>
-  <title>DHIS TRACKER</title>
+  <title>Tracker</title>
   <section>
     <title>Introduction</title>
     <section>
-      <title>Quick Background</title>
-      <para>Conventionally, Public Health Systems have been recording and reporting aggregated data of the services provided across various health programmes. Though this is crucial in monitoring &quot;<emphasis role="italic">reach</emphasis>&quot; and &quot;<emphasis role="italic">availability</emphasis>&quot; of public health services, but it lacks tracing the persons being provided these services and quality of these ones. </para>
+      <title>Background</title>
+      <para>Conventionally, public health systems have been recording and reporting aggregate data
+        of the services provided across various health programmes. This is crucial in monitoring
+          &quot;<emphasis role="italic">reach</emphasis>&quot; and &quot;<emphasis role="italic"
+          >availability</emphasis>&quot; of public health services, but it lacks the ability of
+        tracing the persons being provided with these services and quality of these ones. </para>
       <para>For example, the aggregate report will show that 300 pregnant women registered  for ANC and 120 women given IFA tablets or 90 women given TT injection. In an aggregate system, it is not possible to ascertain that if a particular pregnant woman registered for ANC, has also been given IFA and TT, as data only shows aggregate numbers. To understand the quality of services given to each pregnant woman registered for ANC, immunization cycle of each child or treatment of each leprosy person, etc. it is important that treatment information of each person is maintained as an individual case.</para>
       <para>The DHIS tracker module ( also known as  DHIS Community Module  ) is an integrated module in DHIS2, built to support community health systems and facilitate a smooth integration between the community health data and aggregated data management.</para>
       <para>The module supports management of community health programs, such as child immunization, maternal health and e.g. allows tracking of individuals enrolled in various programs and activity planning for community health workers.</para>
@@ -34,7 +38,7 @@
           <para>Support the work practices around tracking persons within a health program.</para>
         </listitem>
       </orderedlist>
-      <para><emphasis role="bold">Advantages of tracker module -</emphasis></para>
+      <para><emphasis role="bold">Advantages of tracker module</emphasis></para>
       <orderedlist>
         <listitem>
           <para>Facilitate the health service provider  in person&apos;s treatment follow-up by recording all treatment related information in one place and in effective monitoring of different health services and drill down to individual person information.</para>
@@ -55,7 +59,7 @@
       <para>The data in primary registers at sub-center level is recorded and maintained by individual data or treatment cases, and sent up-wards as aggregate reports.</para>
     </section>
     <section>
-      <title>Getting started with DHIS Tracker</title>
+      <title>Getting started with tracker</title>
       <para>The module supports health providers for registering treatment cases and tracks these cases over time through different forms that are filled for the treatment of each person.</para>
       <para>The process  starts with the person registration. Then she/he can be enrolled in the program for which registered. The application will guide the health provider  the services required for her/him through activity plan and the services  from time to time can be updated into his/her profile.  The working process is described in steps depicted in picture below - </para>
       <screenshot>
@@ -76,7 +80,11 @@
       </section>
       <section>
         <title>Program enrollment</title>
-        <para>When a person is enrolled into any health programme, he/she is be provided identifier number (e.g PARA, parish, ... ) and declare some attributes which belong to the program. After, the person is  provided various services through the treatment are recorded. Based on the services of the program by the time, the system creates an activity plan for person.</para>
+        <para>When a person is enrolled into any health programme, he/she is being provided with an
+          identifier number (e.g PARA, parish) and declared some attributes which belong to the
+          program. Later, the person is provided with various services through the treatment which
+          are being recorded. Based on the services of the program by the time, the system creates
+          an activity plan for the person.</para>
       </section>
       <section>
         <title>Treatment case</title>