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[Guruprasad <mp+451926@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx>]

Guruprasad has proposed merging ~lgp171188/launchpad:fix-snaps-description-new-snap-page into launchpad:master.

Commit message:
Update the description for snaps in the new snap page
    
Use the description that is currently in https://snapcraft.io/docs.
    
LP: #2037033

Requested reviews:
  Launchpad code reviewers (launchpad-reviewers)
Related bugs:
  Bug #2037033 in Launchpad itself: "The +new-snap text does mention snappy and points to an invalid (404) URL for documentation"
  https://bugs.launchpad.net/launchpad/+bug/2037033

For more details, see:
https://code.launchpad.net/~lgp171188/launchpad/+git/launchpad/+merge/451926
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Your team Launchpad code reviewers is requested to review the proposed merge of ~lgp171188/launchpad:fix-snaps-description-new-snap-page into launchpad:master.

diff --git a/lib/lp/snappy/templates/snap-new.pt b/lib/lp/snappy/templates/snap-new.pt
index 29e8f64..1f15132 100644
--- a/lib/lp/snappy/templates/snap-new.pt
+++ b/lib/lp/snappy/templates/snap-new.pt
@@ -10,9 +10,9 @@
 <div metal:fill-slot="main">
   <div>
     <p>
-      A snap package is a self-contained application that can be installed
-      on <a href="https://developer.ubuntu.com/en/snappy/";>snappy Ubuntu
-      Core</a>.  Launchpad can build snap packages using <a
+      Snaps are Linux app packages for desktop, cloud and IoT that are
+      simple to install, secure, cross-platform, and dependency-free.
+      Launchpad can build snap packages using <a
       href="https://developer.ubuntu.com/en/snappy/snapcraft/";>snapcraft</a>,
       from any Git or Bazaar branch on Launchpad that has a
       <tt>snap/snapcraft.yaml</tt>, <tt>build-aux/snap/snapcraft.yaml</tt>,