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[Roger Erens <roger.erens@xxxxxxxxx>]

Hi Tim,

good work! Some quick suggestions:
1) left-aligning the text instead of justifying makes the pages look a
little restless in my opinion
2) since it's a reference manual, I would choose to list the classes
in the packages in alphabetical order
3) the analogy between Lego and MLHIM approach: I would compare the
Reference Model with (info in) the catalog of all the Lego-bricks used
in a Lego-product line (e.g. Star Wars) (so not a catalog of *all*
Lego-bricks ever produced). Then the actual Lego-bricks from this
product line (cf Healthcare domain) are instantiations of the info in
the catalog. The bricks are analogous to the actual data-items, that
have to be bound to the toy-model (archetype). At least, this is how I
would improve the analogy in the openEHR docs, where I long time
believed the actual data-items were instantiations of
archetype-classes ,where those archetype-classes were created at
design-time instead of run-time.

Cheers,

Roger

On Thu, Jun 9, 2011 at 20:33, Timothy Cook <timothywayne.cook@xxxxxxxxx> wrote:
> Hi All,
>
>
> I have uploaded a PDF of the draft 2.2.0 specs to
> http://www.mlhim.org/mlhim-2.0/mlhim-ref-man-2.0.x-enUS.pdf/view
>
> I would appreciate it if some of you would read through it quickly and
> see if you find any glaring errors or subtle bugs.
>
> It is only 74 pages at this point so not too tough to scan.
>
> Thanks,
> Tim
>
>
>
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