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["Sandy Carter \(http://www.savoirfairelinux.com\)" <sandy.carter@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx>]

Review: Needs Fixing grammar

Grammar mistakes in the description

l.11  instances should be plural
This is useful for instance
This is useful for instances

l.12 comma after case
In which case a possible workflow
In which case, a possible workflow

l.12 run on sentence, consider breaking into two
In which case, a possible workflow
could be that the company is allowed to use that stock, but this would generate
a purchase order for the real owner of the stock, with or without direct
delivery.
In which case, a possible workflow
could be that the company is allowed to use that stock. This would generate
a purchase order for the real owner of the stock, with or without direct
delivery.
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