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[Jonathan Corwin <j@xxxxxxxxxxxx>]

Review: Needs Fixing
Glad to see my 5 minute written quickly "About" is getting some needed improvements :)

Line 43: veriety
Line 44: attractvie
Line 51: Change "even on" to "including?" (yes I know I'm correcting my own text here!)
Line 54: Why have you changed "beaten" to "beat"? Or is this a UK/US difference in language?

Line 79/80. Too many want's. Change the second to 'would like' perhaps? And 94/95
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