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[Wesley Stout <wesleystout@xxxxxxxxx>]

Wesley Stout has proposed merging lp:~wesleystout/openlp/documentation into lp:openlp.

Requested reviews:
  OpenLP Core (openlp-core)

For more details, see:
https://code.launchpad.net/~wesleystout/openlp/documentation/+merge/56399

I think this needs some further review before considered to be merged. I have cleaned up a few things, but as gushie pointed out earlier in IRC do we really need the much debated and corrected about OpenLP in both the FAQ and the introduction? Granted someone may read one and not the other, but is it that important that we have it included twice? I also wonder about the question "Is there a manual or documentation for OpenLP?" since well they are reading the manual that they are questioning about. Maybe something more along the lines of a how can I help with documentation? I'm thinking we may need to link some things that are in the FAQ over to the troubleshooting section also? 
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https://code.launchpad.net/~wesleystout/openlp/documentation/+merge/56399
Your team OpenLP Core is requested to review the proposed merge of lp:~wesleystout/openlp/documentation into lp:openlp.

=== modified file 'documentation/manual/source/faq.rst'
--- documentation/manual/source/faq.rst	2011-04-03 18:13:12 +0000
+++ documentation/manual/source/faq.rst	2011-04-05 16:14:28 +0000
@@ -8,28 +8,31 @@
 What is OpenLP?
 ---------------
 
-
-OpenLP stands for "Open source Lyric Projection" and is presentation software 
-developed for Churches to provide a single easy to use interface for the 
-projection needs of a typical act of Worship. First created in 2004, it has 
-steadily grown in features and maturity such that is it now a mainstay in 
-hundreds of churches around the world. 
-
-It can hold a searchable database of song lyrics and Bible verses allowing them 
-to be projected instantly or saved in a pre-prepared order of service file. 
-Themes allow song backgrounds to be changed instantly. PowerPoint presentations, 
-videos and audio files can be run from within the program removing the need to 
-switch between different programs. Alert messages can be displayed so the 
-Nursery or Car park stewards can notify the congregation easily. Remote 
-capability allows the worship leader to change songs, or for alert messages to 
-be sent from anywhere on the network, even via a phone.
-
-Being free, this software can be installed on as many computers as required,
-even on the home computers of worship leaders without additional cost. Compared
-to the expensive site licenses or restrictions of commercial software we believe
-OpenLP cannot be beaten for value. Still in active development by a growing team
-of enthusiastic developers, features are being added all the time, meaning the 
-software just improves all the time.
+OpenLP stands for "Open Source Lyrics Projection" and is presentation software
+developed for churches to provide a single easy to use interface for the
+projection needs of a typical worship service. First created in 2004, it has
+steadily grown in features and maturity such that it is now a mainstay in
+hundreds of churches around the world.
+
+OpenLP has searchable databases of songs and Bible verses allowing them to be
+projected instantly or saved in a pre-prepared order of service file. Themes
+allow for a variety of presentation options and allow you to add attractive
+visuals to enhance your presentations. PowerPoint and OpenOffice presentations,
+videos and audio files can be run from within the program removing the need to
+switch between different programs. Alert messages can be displayed so the
+nursery or car park stewards can notify the congregation easily. Remote
+capability allows the worship leader to change songs, or for alert messages to
+be sent from anywhere on the network, even via a smart phone or tablet.
+
+Being free, this software can be installed on as many PCs as required, 
+including the home PCs of worship leader(s) at no additional cost. Compared to
+the expensive site licenses and restrictions of commercial software we believe 
+OpenLP is the perfect choice for quality and value. Still in active development
+by a growing team of enthusiastic developers, features are being added all the 
+time resulting in continual improvement of the software.
+
+OpenLP is licensed under the GNU Generic Public License, which means
+that it is free to use, distribute, modify, and it stays free.
 
 When is the release date for OpenLP 2.0?
 ----------------------------------------
@@ -67,7 +70,7 @@
   it, then perhaps review the software or ask others to review it.
 
 What operating systems will OpenLP 2.0 support?
-===============================================
+-----------------------------------------------
 
 OpenLP 2.0 is designed to be cross platform. Currently it has been known to run 
 on Windows (XP, Vista, 7), Linux (Ubuntu/Kubuntu, Fedora), FreeBSD & Mac OSX. 
@@ -377,7 +380,7 @@
    ``bugs (at) openlp.org``.
 
 What information should I include in a bug report?
-==================================================
+--------------------------------------------------
 
 Since OpenLP 1.9.4, there is a bug report dialog which automatically opens when
 OpenLP hits a serious bug. However, this doesn't appear all the time, and in

=== modified file 'documentation/manual/source/introduction.rst'
--- documentation/manual/source/introduction.rst	2011-03-31 18:42:07 +0000
+++ documentation/manual/source/introduction.rst	2011-04-05 16:14:28 +0000
@@ -8,7 +8,7 @@
 OpenLP stands for "Open Source Lyrics Projection" and is presentation software
 developed for churches to provide a single easy to use interface for the
 projection needs of a typical worship service. First created in 2004, it has
-steadily grown in features and maturity such that is it now a mainstay in
+steadily grown in features and maturity such that it is now a mainstay in
 hundreds of churches around the world.
 
 OpenLP has searchable databases of songs and Bible verses allowing them to be
@@ -40,5 +40,4 @@
 well.
 
 You can find a copy of the GNU General Public License from the Help menu 
-selecting about OpenLP or on-line at:
-`<http://www.gnu.org/licenses/old-licenses/gpl-2.0.txt>`_.
+selecting about OpenLP or `view the license on-line <http://www.gnu.org/licenses/old-licenses/gpl-2.0.txt>`_.

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=== modified file 'documentation/manual/source/themes.rst'
--- documentation/manual/source/themes.rst	2011-03-23 00:13:55 +0000
+++ documentation/manual/source/themes.rst	2011-04-05 16:14:28 +0000
@@ -1,3 +1,5 @@
+.. _themes:
+
 ======
 Themes
 ======

=== modified file 'documentation/manual/source/troubleshooting.rst'
--- documentation/manual/source/troubleshooting.rst	2011-04-04 13:04:16 +0000
+++ documentation/manual/source/troubleshooting.rst	2011-04-05 16:14:28 +0000
@@ -126,7 +126,7 @@
 
 The book, chapter, and verse should be displayed when you display scripture. If
 you can not see this your theme probably has the text size too small for the 
-info to be seen. See the section of the manual on themes if you need more info
+info to be seen. See the section of the manual on :ref:`themes` if you need more info
 on text sizes in themes.
 
 I am running Mac OS X and I do not have a presentations plugin
@@ -173,4 +173,4 @@
 Due to copyright restrictions OpenLP cannot download an entire Bible. It can
 only download the section you search for. If you do not have an internet 
 connection where you intend to use OpenLP you will need another scripture
-source. For more information about acquiring bibles please see :ref:`bibleimporter`.
+source. For more information about acquiring bibles please see :ref:`bibleimporter`.
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