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Re: [Merge] lp:~wesleystout/openlp/documentation into lp:openlp/documentation

 

Some of these changes sound better to me. Maybe personal preference?

Line 28 change we to "you" and consider "First you will need to"
Line 46 Now you need to restart
Line 47 cap the When
Line 52 You will see the
Line 61 consider using ** for bold per Raoul
Line 69-70 You will need to add
Line 75 You instead of we
Line 91 You instead of we

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https://code.launchpad.net/~wesleystout/openlp/documentation/+merge/60795
Your team OpenLP Core is requested to review the proposed merge of lp:~wesleystout/openlp/documentation into lp:openlp/documentation.


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