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Re: [Bug 1152895] [NEW] Proofreading & comments on Help documentation
HI Jennifer,
Please, first use this FAQ (and especially) which will give more
complementary informations.
https://answers.launchpad.net/openshot/+faq/2197
Thanks.
2013/3/9 Jennifer <1152895@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx>
> Public bug reported:
>
> Openshot v1.4.3 on Ubuntu 10.04 LTS Lucid Lynx, installed via PPA.
> (Older version previously installed via Synaptic and removed with
> "Complete Removal".)
>
> I've just been reading the Help files, as a newcomer and "documentation
> enthusiast" :-) Some things caught my attention, so I thought I'd flag
> them up. A few are about the actual information, some are just typos.
>
> a) None of my "help" file was pictures - it was all text & tables.
> Sometimes it refers to illustrations, so I guess there ought to have
> been some...?
>
> b) Part 4.1 Overview.
>
> Item 2 - Function Tabs - the text is "Copy text Switch between
> Project Files, Transitions, and Effects."
> Item 3 - Project Files - the text is "Switch between Project Files,
> Transitions, and Effects."
>
> This looks to me like a leftover of some updating or something :-)
>
> c) Part 6.9 Save Project screen.
>
> Item 3 - Project Length - the text is "The maximum length of the
> timeline. However, the length of the timeline will automatically grow,
> if and when clips exceed the length."
>
> I'm not sure what this means. If the clips exceed _this_ length, it
> isn't the maximum, is it? I'm thinking maybe you must mean something
> like "The length of the timeline will automatically grow as you add
> clips, up to this maximum." (If that _is_ what you mean, you might want
> another sentence which says what happens if you try to add a clip beyond
> the maximum length.)
>
> d) Import Files – Audio, Video, and Images
>
> I'd have liked to be told here whether the files I import will be saved
> as part of the project, or whether the project is simply referring to
> files external to itself.
>
> e) Part 12.2. Only the Audio.
>
> A minor proof-reading point: in "click the eye icon on the track", you
> have two spaces in between "eye" and "icon".
>
> f) 14.5. Speed Tab
>
> "The advanced tab let's you set...": should be "lets".
>
> g) 15.3. Manually
>
> "The following properties are affected by key-frames: Height, Wight, X,
> Y, and Alpha." Is there such a thing as "Wight" that I've never heard
> of, or is that a typo for "Width"?
>
> h) 18.4.3. Animate Each Title
>
> "(as show in the illustration)": should be "shown". (But as I said
> above, I didn't get any illustrations.)
>
> i) Upload Video
>
> "Choose a video file to upload to YouTube. Be sure it's a compatible
> format with YouTube first, or it might not work correctly."
>
> I'm guessing the Vimeo option was added later? I suggest "Choose a
> video file to upload to YouTube or Vimeo. Be sure that your video's
> format is compatible with the destination, or it might not work
> correctly."
>
> j) Layout of the help manual: where the page of info is shorter than
> the index on the right, I would prefer not to have to move to the bottom
> of the page before being able to click on the "next" link. I'd like to
> have the next & previous links at the top as well. But I don't know if
> you can do anything about that.
>
> h.t.h. :-)
>
> ** Affects: openshot
> Importance: Undecided
> Status: New
>
>
> ** Tags: documentation
>
> ** Description changed:
>
> - Openshot v1.4.3 on Ubuntu 10.04 LTS Lucid Lynx, installed via PPA (but
> - older version previously installed via Synaptic and "Complete
> - Removal"-d).
> + Openshot v1.4.3 on Ubuntu 10.04 LTS Lucid Lynx, installed via PPA.
> + (Older version previously installed via Synaptic and removed with
> + "Complete Removal".)
>
> I've just been reading the Help files, as a newcomer and "documentation
> enthusiast" :-) Some things caught my attention, so I thought I'd flag
> them up. A few are about the actual information, some are just typos.
>
> a) None of my "help" file was pictures - it was all text & tables.
> Sometimes it refers to illustrations, so I guess there ought to have
> been some...?
>
> b) Part 4.1 Overview.
>
> Item 2 - Function Tabs - the text is "Copy text Switch between
> Project Files, Transitions, and Effects."
> Item 3 - Project Files - the text is "Switch between Project Files,
> Transitions, and Effects."
>
> This looks to me like a leftover of some updating or something :-)
>
> c) Part 6.9 Save Project screen.
>
> Item 3 - Project Length - the text is "The maximum length of the
> timeline. However, the length of the timeline will automatically grow,
> if and when clips exceed the length."
>
> I'm not sure what this means. If the clips exceed _this_ length, it
> isn't the maximum, is it? I'm thinking maybe you must mean something
> like "The length of the timeline will automatically grow as you add
> clips, up to this maximum." (If that _is_ what you mean, you might want
> another sentence which says what happens if you try to add a clip beyond
> the maximum length.)
>
> d) Import Files – Audio, Video, and Images
>
> I'd have liked to be told here whether the files I import will be saved
> as part of the project, or whether the project is simply referring to
> files external to itself.
>
> e) Part 12.2. Only the Audio.
>
> A minor proof-reading point: in "click the eye icon on the track", you
> have two spaces in between "eye" and "icon".
>
> f) 14.5. Speed Tab
>
> "The advanced tab let's you set...": should be "lets".
>
> g) 15.3. Manually
>
> "The following properties are affected by key-frames: Height, Wight, X,
> Y, and Alpha." Is there such a thing as "Wight" that I've never heard
> of, or is that a typo for "Width"?
>
> h) 18.4.3. Animate Each Title
>
> "(as show in the illustration)": should be "shown". (But as I said
> above, I didn't get any illustrations.)
>
> i) Upload Video
>
> "Choose a video file to upload to YouTube. Be sure it's a compatible
> format with YouTube first, or it might not work correctly."
>
> I'm guessing the Vimeo option was added later? I suggest "Choose a
> video file to upload to YouTube or Vimeo. Be sure that your video's
> format is compatible with the destination, or it might not work
> correctly."
>
> j) Layout of the help manual: where the page of info is shorter than
> the index on the right, I would prefer not to have to move to the bottom
> of the page before being able to click on the "next" link. I'd like to
> have the next & previous links at the top as well. But I don't know if
> you can do anything about that.
>
> h.t.h. :-)
>
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> https://bugs.launchpad.net/bugs/1152895
>
> Title:
> Proofreading & comments on Help documentation
>
> Status in OpenShot Video Editor:
> New
>
> Bug description:
> Openshot v1.4.3 on Ubuntu 10.04 LTS Lucid Lynx, installed via PPA.
> (Older version previously installed via Synaptic and removed with
> "Complete Removal".)
>
> I've just been reading the Help files, as a newcomer and
> "documentation enthusiast" :-) Some things caught my attention, so I
> thought I'd flag them up. A few are about the actual information,
> some are just typos.
>
> a) None of my "help" file was pictures - it was all text & tables.
> Sometimes it refers to illustrations, so I guess there ought to have
> been some...?
>
> b) Part 4.1 Overview.
>
> Item 2 - Function Tabs - the text is "Copy text Switch between
> Project Files, Transitions, and Effects."
> Item 3 - Project Files - the text is "Switch between Project Files,
> Transitions, and Effects."
>
> This looks to me like a leftover of some updating or something :-)
>
> c) Part 6.9 Save Project screen.
>
> Item 3 - Project Length - the text is "The maximum length of the
> timeline. However, the length of the timeline will automatically
> grow, if and when clips exceed the length."
>
> I'm not sure what this means. If the clips exceed _this_ length, it
> isn't the maximum, is it? I'm thinking maybe you must mean something
> like "The length of the timeline will automatically grow as you add
> clips, up to this maximum." (If that _is_ what you mean, you might
> want another sentence which says what happens if you try to add a clip
> beyond the maximum length.)
>
> d) Import Files – Audio, Video, and Images
>
> I'd have liked to be told here whether the files I import will be
> saved as part of the project, or whether the project is simply
> referring to files external to itself.
>
> e) Part 12.2. Only the Audio.
>
> A minor proof-reading point: in "click the eye icon on the track",
> you have two spaces in between "eye" and "icon".
>
> f) 14.5. Speed Tab
>
> "The advanced tab let's you set...": should be "lets".
>
> g) 15.3. Manually
>
> "The following properties are affected by key-frames: Height, Wight,
> X, Y, and Alpha." Is there such a thing as "Wight" that I've never
> heard of, or is that a typo for "Width"?
>
> h) 18.4.3. Animate Each Title
>
> "(as show in the illustration)": should be "shown". (But as I said
> above, I didn't get any illustrations.)
>
> i) Upload Video
>
> "Choose a video file to upload to YouTube. Be sure it's a compatible
> format with YouTube first, or it might not work correctly."
>
> I'm guessing the Vimeo option was added later? I suggest "Choose a
> video file to upload to YouTube or Vimeo. Be sure that your video's
> format is compatible with the destination, or it might not work
> correctly."
>
> j) Layout of the help manual: where the page of info is shorter than
> the index on the right, I would prefer not to have to move to the
> bottom of the page before being able to click on the "next" link. I'd
> like to have the next & previous links at the top as well. But I
> don't know if you can do anything about that.
>
> h.t.h. :-)
>
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