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[George DiceGeorge <dicegeorge@xxxxxxxxxxx>]

Is it OK if i proofread
and send you suggested improvements like this:

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http://hugsmile.eu/file/torios/manual/node3.html

[GNU stands for GNU's Not Unix] insert a possessive apostrophe
[up-to-date security built-in] may not need hyphens
[." "ToriOS does not require a special setup for non-PAE hardware as Ubuntu 
requires"] three superfluous inverted commas  - """


http://hugsmile.eu/file/torios/manual/node5.html
[flash disk*]  I call them USB stick

http://hugsmile.eu/file/torios/manual/node7.html
change
[different so for ToriOS you may have ToriOS-1.0.0.iso the ]
to
[different (so for ToriOS you may have ToriOS-1.0.0.iso) the ]

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[george]

-----Original Message----- 
From: Smile4ever
Sent: Sunday, 18 January, 2015 16:16
To: torios
Subject: [Torios] The HTML manual work

Hi

I worked on the new docs, you can find them (hosted) here:

http://hugsmile.eu/file/torios/manual/torios.html

New:
* Numix icons
* Better layout :) for example, no double "Contents" page

@zleap:
https://github.com/zleap/torios-manual/pull/3

:)

Kind regards,
Geoffrey De Belie / Smile4ever



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