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[Bug 1389192] Re: "Fitbit" text in Dashboard has poor grammar, capitalization, punctuation, and call to action

 

Bug still present in ubuntu-rtm/14.09-proposed-customized 14.10 r214;
reopening. Now it says "Please add a fitbi…", but I guess that's a
layout problem on top of the contents problem.

If unity8 isn't the appropriate place, please move it there. I can't be
expected to know the name for a project that isn't listed on
<https://wiki.ubuntu.com/Avengers>.

** Changed in: unity8 (Ubuntu)
       Status: Invalid => New

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Title:
  "Fitbit" text in Dashboard has poor grammar, capitalization,
  punctuation, and call to action

Status in “unity8” package in Ubuntu:
  New

Bug description:
  Ubuntu 14.10 r6

  0. Remove your Fitbit account from the phone if you have one.
  1. Go to the "Dashboard" screen and scroll to "Fitbit".

  What you see: "Please setup an account in system settings"

  What's wrong with this:
  A. "Setup" is a noun, so "Please setup" is ungrammatical.
  B. "System Settings" is a proper noun, so "system settings" is miscapitalized.
  C. A caption is a complete sentence (sometimes more than one), and this sentence is missing its period.
  D. There's no explanation of why you *should* set up an account.
  E. "In system settings" is a useless direction. The word "Fitbit" does not appear anywhere on the System Settings screen, leaving you lost.
  F. Sending people to System Settings is the wrong thing to do in the first place: they might already have a Fitbit account set up.

  What you should see: something like
  ------------
  Track your fitness activities here using a Fitbit account.
  ( Use Fitbit… ) ( No Thanks )
  ------------

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