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[Dylan McCall <dylanmccall@xxxxxxxxx>]

Dylan McCall has proposed merging lp:~dylanmccall/ubiquity-slideshow-ubuntu/quantal-ubuntu-copy into lp:ubiquity-slideshow-ubuntu.

Requested reviews:
  Ubiquity Slideshow (ubiquity-slideshow)

For more details, see:
https://code.launchpad.net/~dylanmccall/ubiquity-slideshow-ubuntu/quantal-ubuntu-copy/+merge/126337

New copy for Ubuntu 12.10, ready to merge with a freeze exception request.
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https://code.launchpad.net/~dylanmccall/ubiquity-slideshow-ubuntu/quantal-ubuntu-copy/+merge/126337
Your team Ubiquity Slideshow is requested to review the proposed merge of lp:~dylanmccall/ubiquity-slideshow-ubuntu/quantal-ubuntu-copy into lp:ubiquity-slideshow-ubuntu.

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-<div class="header"><h1 class="slidetitle">Customize Ubuntu</h1></div>
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-<p>At the heart of Ubuntu’s philosophy is a belief that computing is for everyone. With advanced accessibility tools and options like your preferred color scheme, text size, and language, Ubuntu is for anyone. Whoever you are, and wherever you are.</p>
+<p>At the heart of the Ubuntu philosophy is the belief that computing is for everyone. With advanced accessibility tools and options to change language, colour scheme and text size, Ubuntu makes computing easy — whoever and wherever you are. </p>
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-<div class="header"><h1 class="slidetitle">Browse the web</h1></div>
+<div class="header"><h1 class="slidetitle">Make the most of the web</h1></div>
 
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-<p>Ubuntu includes Mozilla Firefox for fast and safe web browsing. It’s easy to use and it’s backed by a non-profit foundation that loves the web. If you aren’t a Firefox fan, there are also lots of alternatives in the Ubuntu Software Center.</p>
+<p>Ubuntu includes Firefox, the web browser used by millions of people around the world. And web applications you use frequently (like Facebook or Gmail, for example) can be pinned to your desktop for faster access, just like apps on your computer.</p>
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-<p>Check out <a href="http://askubuntu.com/";>Ask Ubuntu</a>, the best place to get an answer about Ubuntu. With most questions already answered, and thousands of people ready to help, you’ll be sorted in no time at all. And if you need an answer on a deadline, you can get commercial support and more at <a href="http://www.ubuntu.com/support";>ubuntu.com/support</a>.</p>
+<p>Check out <a href="http://askubuntu.com/";>askubuntu.com</a> for answers to all your Ubuntu questions. There’s a good chance your question will have been answered already and, if not, you’ll find thousands of volunteers eager to help. For more support options, go to <a href="http://www.ubuntu.com/support";>ubuntu.com/support</a>.</p>
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-<p>An <a href="https://one.ubuntu.com/services/";>Ubuntu One Free</a> account gives you 5GB of cloud storage, so you can store and sync your files and photos across devices and access them wherever you are in the world. Easily share them with friends, family and colleagues. Take a photo on your mobile phone and immediately see it on your desktop, or add <a href="https://one.ubuntu.com/services/music/";>Music Streaming</a> for mobile to enjoy your music on the move.</p>
+<p><a href="https://one.ubuntu.com/services/free/";>Ubuntu One</a> gives you 5GB of free cloud storage to access your files, share your photos and <a href="https://one.ubuntu.com/services/music/";>stream your music</a> to your computers, tablets and smartphones. Any photo you take appears on all your devices, the instant you take it. Ubuntu One runs on Ubuntu, Windows, Mac, Android, iOS and the web.</p>
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-<div class="header"><h1 class="slidetitle">Take your music with you</h1></div>
+<div class="header"><h1 class="slidetitle">All the music you need</h1></div>
 
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-<p>Ubuntu comes with the amazing Rhythmbox music player. With advanced playback options and the Ubuntu One music store built in, it’s simple to queue up the perfect songs. And it works great with CDs and portable music players, so you can enjoy all your music wherever you go.</p>
+<p>Ubuntu comes with Rhythmbox, for organising and playing your music. Compatible with all common portable music players, it includes the Ubuntu Music Store, so you can find and buy new music in seconds.</p>
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-<div class="header"><h1 class="slidetitle">Write and present for free</h1></div>
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-<p>LibreOffice is a free office suite packed with everything you’ll need to create impressive documents, spreadsheets, and presentations. LibreOffice tries its best to work with other office software, and it uses the OpenDocument standards for far-reaching compatibility.</p>
+<p>LibreOffice is a free office suite packed with everything you need to create documents, spreadsheets and presentations. Compatible with Microsoft Office file formats, it gives you all the features you need, without the price tag.</p>
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-<p>The Ubuntu Message Indicator gives you an eagle-eye view of incoming messages from all applications and social networks. See at a glance when there’s something new to read, regardless how it arrived.</p>
+<p>The messaging menu gives you an eagle-eye view of incoming messages from all applications and social networks. So you can see straight away when there’s something new to read, regardless of how it arrived.</p>
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-<p>The Ubuntu Software Center has thousands of new applications ready for your computer. Just type what you want or explore the categories like games, science, and education. It is easy to download new stuff and write reviews to share your experiences.</p>
+<p>Say goodbye to searching the web for new software. With Ubuntu Software Center, you can find and install new apps with ease. Just type in what you’re looking for, or explore categories such as Science, Education and Games, alongside helpful reviews from other users.</p>
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-<p>Fast and feature-packed, Ubuntu makes your PC a delight to use. And with the latest version of the Unity interface, it's now easier than ever. Here are a few more cool new things to look out for.</p>
+<p>Fast and full of new features, the latest version of Ubuntu makes computing easier than ever. Here are just a few cool new things to look out for…</p>
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