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lp:~jbicha/ubiquity-slideshow-ubuntu/final-ubuntu-gnome-saucy-updates into lp:ubiquity-slideshow-ubuntu

 

Jeremy Bicha has proposed merging lp:~jbicha/ubiquity-slideshow-ubuntu/final-ubuntu-gnome-saucy-updates into lp:ubiquity-slideshow-ubuntu.

Requested reviews:
  Ubiquity Slideshow (ubiquity-slideshow)

For more details, see:
https://code.launchpad.net/~jbicha/ubiquity-slideshow-ubuntu/final-ubuntu-gnome-saucy-updates/+merge/186576

Sorry for these last minute changes
-- 
https://code.launchpad.net/~jbicha/ubiquity-slideshow-ubuntu/final-ubuntu-gnome-saucy-updates/+merge/186576
Your team Ubiquity Slideshow is requested to review the proposed merge of lp:~jbicha/ubiquity-slideshow-ubuntu/final-ubuntu-gnome-saucy-updates into lp:ubiquity-slideshow-ubuntu.
=== modified file 'po/lubuntu/slideshow-lubuntu.pot'
--- po/lubuntu/slideshow-lubuntu.pot	2013-07-26 13:37:59 +0000
+++ po/lubuntu/slideshow-lubuntu.pot	2013-09-19 15:59:54 +0000
@@ -7,7 +7,7 @@
 msgid ""
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+"POT-Creation-Date: 2013-09-19 11:57-0300\n"
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@@ -49,21 +49,13 @@
 #. type: Content of: <div><div><div><p>
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 msgid ""
-"Browse the web with <em>Chromium</em>, the open-source version of Chrome, a "
-"web browser developed by Google. It's safe, stable, fast and even supports "
-"your favorite addons/extensions."
+"Browse the web using <em>Firefox</em>, the open-source cross-platform web "
+"browser used by millions around the world. It's safe, stable, fast and "
+"supports customization through add-ons."
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+#. type: Content of: <div><div><div><h2>
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-msgid ""
-"Did you know that Lubuntu has its own Chrome extension available for free? "
-"Visit the <a href=\"https://chrome.google.com/webstore/detail/";
-"hemkkjpjknkkndhconammdhlhdkjclim\">Chrome Web Store</a> for more information."
-msgstr ""
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 #: slideshows/lubuntu/slides/03_office.html:12
 #: slideshows/lubuntu/slides/04_media.html:18
 #: slideshows/lubuntu/slides/05_social.html:12
@@ -71,12 +63,12 @@
 msgstr ""
 
 #. type: Content of: <div><div><div><ul><li><p>
-#: slideshows/lubuntu/slides/02_browser.html:20
-msgid "Chromium"
+#: slideshows/lubuntu/slides/02_browser.html:16
+msgid "Firefox"
 msgstr ""
 
 #. type: Content of: <div><div><div><h2>
-#: slideshows/lubuntu/slides/02_browser.html:23
+#: slideshows/lubuntu/slides/02_browser.html:19
 #: slideshows/lubuntu/slides/03_office.html:23
 #: slideshows/lubuntu/slides/04_media.html:32
 #: slideshows/lubuntu/slides/05_social.html:19
@@ -84,13 +76,13 @@
 msgstr ""
 
 #. type: Content of: <div><div><div><ul><li><p>
-#: slideshows/lubuntu/slides/02_browser.html:27
+#: slideshows/lubuntu/slides/02_browser.html:23
 msgid "Flash"
 msgstr ""
 
 #. type: Content of: <div><div><div><ul><li><p>
-#: slideshows/lubuntu/slides/02_browser.html:32
-msgid "Firefox"
+#: slideshows/lubuntu/slides/02_browser.html:28
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=== modified file 'po/ubuntu-gnome/slideshow-ubuntu-gnome.pot'
--- po/ubuntu-gnome/slideshow-ubuntu-gnome.pot	2013-09-13 02:47:51 +0000
+++ po/ubuntu-gnome/slideshow-ubuntu-gnome.pot	2013-09-19 15:59:54 +0000
@@ -7,7 +7,7 @@
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 "Project-Id-Version: PACKAGE VERSION\n"
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 "PO-Revision-Date: YEAR-MO-DA HO:MI+ZONE\n"
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@@ -37,16 +37,11 @@
 
 #. type: Content of: <div><div><div><ul><li><p>
 #: slideshows/ubuntu-gnome/slides/accessibility.html:18
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+msgid "Assistive technologies"
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-msgid "Assistive technologies"
-msgstr ""
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-#. type: Content of: <div><div><div><ul><li><p>
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@@ -58,9 +53,10 @@
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 msgid ""
-"Bored of waiting to get online? Leave the days of slow surfing behind you. "
-"With Firefox already installed, Ubuntu GNOME has everything you need to "
-"browse the web."
+"Ubuntu GNOME has everything you need to browse the web. Firefox offers "
+"powerful personalization, support for cutting-edge web standards, carefully "
+"optimized performance, and advanced security while still remaining easy to "
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@@ -114,7 +110,7 @@
 
 #. type: Content of: <div><div><div><ul><li><p>
 #: slideshows/ubuntu-gnome/slides/desktop.html:18
-msgid "Lauch and manage <strong>your apps</strong> from the Dash"
+msgid "Launch and manage <strong>your apps</strong> from the Dash"
 msgstr ""
 
 #. type: Content of: <div><div><div><ul><li><p>
@@ -129,17 +125,31 @@
 
 #. type: Content of: <div><h1>
 #: slideshows/ubuntu-gnome/slides/gethelp.html:2
-msgid "Any questions?"
+msgid "Help and support"
 msgstr ""
 
 #. type: Content of: <div><div><div><p>
 #: slideshows/ubuntu-gnome/slides/gethelp.html:10
-msgid ""
-"Check out <a href=\"http://askubuntu.com/\";>askubuntu.com</a> for answers to "
-"all your Ubuntu questions. There’s a good chance your question will have "
-"been answered already and, if not, you’ll find thousands of volunteers eager "
-"to help. For more support options, go to <a href=\"http://www.ubuntu.com/";
-"support\">ubuntu.com/support</a>."
+msgid "Thank you for choosing and installing Ubuntu GNOME."
+msgstr ""
+
+#. type: Content of: <div><div><div><p>
+#: slideshows/ubuntu-gnome/slides/gethelp.html:11
+msgid ""
+"Learn more about Ubuntu GNOME from <a href=\"https://wiki.ubuntu.com/";
+"UbuntuGNOME/OneStopPage\">wiki.ubuntu.com/UbuntuGNOME/OneStopPage</a>."
+msgstr ""
+
+#. type: Content of: <div><div><div><p>
+#: slideshows/ubuntu-gnome/slides/gethelp.html:12
+msgid ""
+"For help and support, go to <a href=\"https://wiki.ubuntu.com/UbuntuGNOME/";
+"ContactUs\">wiki.ubuntu.com/UbuntuGNOME/ContactUs</a>."
+msgstr ""
+
+#. type: Content of: <div><div><div><p>
+#: slideshows/ubuntu-gnome/slides/gethelp.html:13
+msgid "Enjoy and have fun!"
 msgstr ""
 
 #. type: Content of: <div><h1>
@@ -157,7 +167,7 @@
 
 #. type: Content of: <div><div><div><ul><li><p>
 #: slideshows/ubuntu-gnome/slides/goa.html:17
-msgid "Acess <strong>your online documents</strong> natively"
+msgid "Access <strong>your online documents</strong> natively"
 msgstr ""
 
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@@ -274,10 +284,10 @@
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 msgid ""
-"Ubuntu Software Centre gives you instant access to thousands of great games "
+"Ubuntu Software Center gives you instant access to thousands of great games "
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-"a couple of clicks."
+"something you like, you can see more information and install it in just a "
+"few clicks."
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 msgid ""
-"Fast and full of new features, the latest version of Ubuntu GNOME makes "
-"computing easier than ever. Here are just a few cool new things to look out "
-"for…"
+"Ubuntu GNOME features the GNOME desktop on top of the popular Ubuntu "
+"foundation."
+msgstr ""
+
+#. type: Content of: <div><div><div><p>
+#: slideshows/ubuntu-gnome/slides/welcome.html:11
+msgid ""
+"We believe the combination of Ubuntu and GNOME is the best choice for those "
+"looking for a beautiful, simple, and usable operating system."
 msgstr ""

=== modified file 'po/xubuntu/slideshow-xubuntu.pot'
--- po/xubuntu/slideshow-xubuntu.pot	2013-09-13 02:47:51 +0000
+++ po/xubuntu/slideshow-xubuntu.pot	2013-09-19 15:59:54 +0000
@@ -6,8 +6,79 @@
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=== modified file 'slideshows/ubuntu-gnome/slides/accessibility.html'
--- slideshows/ubuntu-gnome/slides/accessibility.html	2013-09-13 02:47:51 +0000
+++ slideshows/ubuntu-gnome/slides/accessibility.html	2013-09-19 15:59:54 +0000
@@ -14,10 +14,6 @@
 			<h2 class="subtitle">Customization options</h2>
 			<ul>
 				<li>
-					<img class="icon" src="icons/themes.png" />
-					<p class="caption">Appearance</p>
-				</li>
-				<li>
 					<img class="icon" src="icons/access.png" />
 					<p class="caption">Assistive technologies</p>
 				</li>
@@ -29,5 +25,5 @@
 		</div>
 	</div>
 
-	<img class="screenshot" src="screenshots/accessibility.jpg" />
+	<img class="screenshot" src="screenshots/accessibility.png" />
 </div>

=== modified file 'slideshows/ubuntu-gnome/slides/browse.html'
--- slideshows/ubuntu-gnome/slides/browse.html	2013-09-13 02:47:51 +0000
+++ slideshows/ubuntu-gnome/slides/browse.html	2013-09-19 15:59:54 +0000
@@ -7,7 +7,7 @@
 <div class="main">
 	<div class="text">
 		<div>
-			<p>Bored of waiting to get online? Leave the days of slow surfing behind you. With Firefox already installed, Ubuntu GNOME has everything you need to browse the web.</p>
+			<p>Ubuntu GNOME has everything you need to browse the web. Firefox offers powerful personalization, support for cutting-edge web standards, carefully optimized performance, and advanced security while still remaining easy to use.</p>
 		</div>
 		
 		<div class="featured">

=== modified file 'slideshows/ubuntu-gnome/slides/desktop.html'
--- slideshows/ubuntu-gnome/slides/desktop.html	2013-09-13 02:47:51 +0000
+++ slideshows/ubuntu-gnome/slides/desktop.html	2013-09-19 15:59:54 +0000
@@ -15,7 +15,7 @@
             <ul>
                 <li>
                     <img class="icon" src="icons/overview1.png"/>
-                    <p class="caption">Lauch and manage <strong>your apps</strong> from the Dash</p>
+                    <p class="caption">Launch and manage <strong>your apps</strong> from the Dash</p>
                 </li>
                 <li>
                     <img class="icon" src="icons/overview2.png"/>

=== modified file 'slideshows/ubuntu-gnome/slides/gethelp.html'
--- slideshows/ubuntu-gnome/slides/gethelp.html	2013-09-13 02:47:51 +0000
+++ slideshows/ubuntu-gnome/slides/gethelp.html	2013-09-19 15:59:54 +0000
@@ -1,13 +1,16 @@
 <div class="header">
-	<h1 class="slidetitle">Any questions?
+	<h1 class="slidetitle">Help and support
 		<div style="float: left;"><img src="icons/pic-gethelp.png"/></div>
 	</h1>
 </div>
 
-<div class="main wide">
+<div class="main big">
 	<div class="text">
 		<div>
-			<p>Check out <a href="http://askubuntu.com/";>askubuntu.com</a> for answers to all your Ubuntu questions. There’s a good chance your question will have been answered already and, if not, you’ll find thousands of volunteers eager to help. For more support options, go to <a href="http://www.ubuntu.com/support";>ubuntu.com/support</a>.</p>
+			<p>Thank you for choosing and installing Ubuntu GNOME.<br /> <br />
+			Learn more about Ubuntu GNOME from <a href="https://wiki.ubuntu.com/UbuntuGNOME/OneStopPage";>wiki.ubuntu.com/UbuntuGNOME/OneStopPage</a>. <br /> <br />
+			For help and support, go to <a href="https://wiki.ubuntu.com/UbuntuGNOME/ContactUs";>wiki.ubuntu.com/UbuntuGNOME/ContactUs</a>. <br /> <br />
+			Enjoy and have fun!</p>
 		</div>
 
 	</div>

=== modified file 'slideshows/ubuntu-gnome/slides/goa.html'
--- slideshows/ubuntu-gnome/slides/goa.html	2013-09-13 02:47:51 +0000
+++ slideshows/ubuntu-gnome/slides/goa.html	2013-09-19 15:59:54 +0000
@@ -14,7 +14,7 @@
             <ul>
                  <li>
                     <img class="icon" src="icons/gnome-documents.png"/>
-                    <p class="caption">Acess <strong>your online documents</strong> natively</p>
+                    <p class="caption">Access <strong>your online documents</strong> natively</p>
                 </li>
                 <li>
                     <img class="icon" src="icons/gnome-contacts.png"/>

=== modified file 'slideshows/ubuntu-gnome/slides/index.html'
--- slideshows/ubuntu-gnome/slides/index.html	2013-09-13 02:47:51 +0000
+++ slideshows/ubuntu-gnome/slides/index.html	2013-09-19 15:59:54 +0000
@@ -36,7 +36,7 @@
 				<div><a href="media.html"></a></div>
 				<div><a href="photos.html"></a></div>
 				<div><a href="usc.html"></a></div>
-				<!-- <div><a href="accessibility.html"></a></div> -->
+				<div><a href="accessibility.html"></a></div>
 				<div><a href="gethelp.html"></a></div>
 			</div>
 

=== modified file 'slideshows/ubuntu-gnome/slides/link/base.css'
--- slideshows/ubuntu-gnome/slides/link/base.css	2013-09-13 02:47:51 +0000
+++ slideshows/ubuntu-gnome/slides/link/base.css	2013-09-19 15:59:54 +0000
@@ -146,7 +146,7 @@
 	background-image:url('background.png');
 }
 
-.main.wide {
+.main.big {
 	top:68px;
 	left:0px;
 	right:0px;
@@ -154,6 +154,14 @@
 	background-image:none;
 }
 
+.main.wide{
+	top:68px;
+	left:0px;
+	right:0px;
+	bottom:0px;
+	background-image:url('background.png');
+}
+
 /*
 A slide's body text goes inside here.
 Inner space is 224px wide.
@@ -187,17 +195,35 @@
 	border-bottom:#333333 dotted 1px;
 }
 
+.main.big > .text {
+	top:25px;
+	width:470px;
+}
+
+.main.big > .text > div {
+	background:none;
+	font-size:20px;
+	line-height:1.2em;
+	color:#F7F6F6;
+	text-shadow:1px 1px 2px #333333;
+}
+
 .main.wide > .text {
-	top:25px;
-	width:450px;
+	position:absolute;
+	z-index:10;
+	top:235px;
+	left:36px;
+	width:680px;
+	overflow:auto;
 }
 
 .main.wide > .text > div {
 	background:none;
-	font-size:20px;
+	font-size:inherit;
 	line-height:1.2em;
-	color:#F7F6F6;
-	text-shadow:1px 1px 2px #333333;
+	margin-bottom:8px;
+	padding:6px 12px;
+	background-color:#FCFCFC;
 }
 
 .featured ul {

=== modified file 'slideshows/ubuntu-gnome/slides/media.html'
--- slideshows/ubuntu-gnome/slides/media.html	2013-09-13 02:47:51 +0000
+++ slideshows/ubuntu-gnome/slides/media.html	2013-09-19 15:59:54 +0000
@@ -6,9 +6,9 @@
 
 <div class="main">
     <div class="text">
-        <div>
-            <p>Rhythmbox lets you organize your music and listen to Internet radio, podcasts, and more. <br /> <br />
-            GNOME Videos allows you to easily watch videos from your computer, DVD, or streamed over the Internet.</p>
+        <div>          
+            <p>Rhythmbox lets you organize your music and listen to Internet radio, podcasts, and more.</p> <br /> <br />
+            <p>GNOME Videos allows you to easily watch videos from your computer, DVD, or streamed over the Internet.</p>
         </div>
 
         <div class="featured">

=== renamed file 'slideshows/ubuntu-gnome/slides/screenshots/accessibility.jpg' => 'slideshows/ubuntu-gnome/slides/screenshots/accessibility.png'
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=== modified file 'slideshows/ubuntu-gnome/slides/screenshots/desktop.png'
Binary files slideshows/ubuntu-gnome/slides/screenshots/desktop.png	2013-09-13 02:47:51 +0000 and slideshows/ubuntu-gnome/slides/screenshots/desktop.png	2013-09-19 15:59:54 +0000 differ
=== modified file 'slideshows/ubuntu-gnome/slides/usc.html'
--- slideshows/ubuntu-gnome/slides/usc.html	2013-09-13 02:47:51 +0000
+++ slideshows/ubuntu-gnome/slides/usc.html	2013-09-19 15:59:54 +0000
@@ -8,7 +8,7 @@
 	<div class="text">
 		<div>
 			<p><strong>Say goodbye to searching the web for new software. </strong> <br /> <br />
-			Ubuntu Software Centre gives you instant access to thousands of great games and applications — some free and some available commercially. If you see something you like, you can see more information and then install it in just a couple of clicks.</p>
+			Ubuntu Software Center gives you instant access to thousands of great games and applications — some free and some available commercially. If you see something you like, you can see more information and install it in just a few clicks.</p>
 		</div>
 	</div>
 

=== modified file 'slideshows/ubuntu-gnome/slides/welcome.html'
--- slideshows/ubuntu-gnome/slides/welcome.html	2013-09-13 02:47:51 +0000
+++ slideshows/ubuntu-gnome/slides/welcome.html	2013-09-19 15:59:54 +0000
@@ -4,10 +4,11 @@
 	</h1>
 </div>
 
-<div class="main wide">
+<div class="main big">
 	<div class="text">
 		<div>
-			<p>Fast and full of new features, the latest version of Ubuntu GNOME makes computing easier than ever. Here are just a few cool new things to look out for…</p>
+			<p>Ubuntu GNOME features the GNOME desktop on top of the popular Ubuntu foundation.</p><br /><br />
+			<p>We believe the combination of Ubuntu and GNOME is the best choice for those looking for a beautiful, simple, and usable operating system.</p>
 		</div>
 	</div>
 	


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