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[Elfy <ub.untu@xxxxxxxxxxxxxx>]

Elfy has proposed merging lp:~elfy/ubiquity-slideshow-ubuntu/slide1 into lp:ubiquity-slideshow-ubuntu.

Requested reviews:
  Ubiquity Slideshow (ubiquity-slideshow)

For more details, see:
https://code.launchpad.net/~elfy/ubiquity-slideshow-ubuntu/slide1/+merge/210291

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https://code.launchpad.net/~elfy/ubiquity-slideshow-ubuntu/slide1/+merge/210291
Your team Ubiquity Slideshow is requested to review the proposed merge of lp:~elfy/ubiquity-slideshow-ubuntu/slide1 into lp:ubiquity-slideshow-ubuntu.

=== modified file 'slideshows/xubuntu/slides/01_desktop.html'
--- slideshows/xubuntu/slides/01_desktop.html	2014-02-24 13:46:50 +0000
+++ slideshows/xubuntu/slides/01_desktop.html	2014-03-10 20:32:49 +0000
@@ -4,7 +4,7 @@
 
 <div class="main">
 	<div class="content full">
-		<p>In the desktop, you will see some icons that can be used to access some of the most common places on your system. In addition, you will see a single, multipurpose panel at the top of the screen, much like this:</p>
+		<p>On the desktop, you will see icons that can be used to access some of the most common places on your system. In addition, you will see a single, multipurpose panel at the top of the screen, much like this:</p>
 		<div class="panel">
 			<img src="images/shot_panel.png" alt="Xubuntu default panel" />
 		</div>
@@ -16,8 +16,8 @@
 			<p class="note">The middle part of the panel is dedicated to window buttons for open applications.</p>
 		</div>
 		<div class="content half">
-			<p class="note">Far in the right, you will see a clock and a date. Click the date to see the monthly calendar.</p>
-			<p class="note">Left to the clock you will see the indicators, which give you information on your system, including network connectivity, battery (when appropriate), volume level, instant messages and more.</p>
+			<p class="note">On the far right, you will see a clock and a date. Click the date to see the monthly calendar.</p>
+			<p class="note">Left of the clock you will see the indicators, which give you information on your system, including network connectivity, battery (when appropriate), volume level, instant messages and more.</p>
 		</div>
 	</div>