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Message #01131
[Bug 584636] Re: Awkward wording on page 10 under contact details
removed "freely" altogether; that's clear given "contributed"
** Changed in: ubuntu-manual
Status: New => In Progress
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Awkward wording on page 10 under contact details
https://bugs.launchpad.net/bugs/584636
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Status in Ubuntu Manual: In Progress
Bug description:
Version: 788
Chapter and page number: Prologue, p. 10 (p. 12 of the PDF)
Type: style/grammar
The first line under 'Contact details' reads "Many people have contributed their time freely [...]". This sounds a little awkward; perhaps "Many people have freely contributed their time" would be an improvement.
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