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[ilya haykinson <haykinson@xxxxxxxxx>]

changed to "For the vast majority of everyday computing tasks, ..."

** Changed in: ubuntu-manual
       Status: New => In Progress

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Awkward wording on page 9; rephrasing recommended
https://bugs.launchpad.net/bugs/584633
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Bug description:
Version: 788
Chapter and page number: Prologue, p. 9 (p. 11 of the PDF)
Type: grammar/sentence structure/style

The second sentence of the second bullet point under 'Is Ubuntu right for you?' reads "For the vast majority of tasks that people use their computers for every day [...]", which sounds rather awkward. An alternative is "For the vast majority of everyday tasks that computer use facilitates [...]".