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[Bug 585380] Re: Superfluous comma before "and" on p.34

 

I've fixed this in the second edition. Thanks!

** Changed in: ubuntu-manual
       Status: In Progress => Fix Committed

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Superfluous comma before "and" on p.34
https://bugs.launchpad.net/bugs/585380
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Status in Ubuntu Manual: Fix Committed

Bug description:
Rev. 788
Ch. 2, § "Workspaces", p. 34 (PDF p. 36)
Type: grammar

Manual has:
In this case you can still change between workspaces by moving the mouse over the workspace switcher, and scrolling the mouse wheel.

Moving the mouse over the workspace switcher and scrolling the mouse comprise a single action, not a list of options, so there shouldn't be a comma separating them, although one after "in this case" wouldn't hurt:

In this case, you can still change between workspaces by moving the mouse over the workspace switcher and scrolling the mouse wheel.





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