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[Marc Stewart <marc.c.stewart@xxxxxxxxxxxxxx>]

** Summary changed:

- Comma suggestion, p.61
+ Comma suggestion, pp.61-62

** Description changed:

  Rev. 788
- Ch. 3, § "Setting up an IMAP connection", p. 61 (PDF p. 63)
+ Ch. 3; §§ "Setting up an IMAP connection", "Setting up a POP connection" p. 61 (PDF p. 63); § "Setting up your Sending options", p. 62 (PDF p. 64)
  Type: resolving ambiguity
  
  A comma in the following helps indicate that the recommendation is from
  the provider, preventing the misinterpretation that the reader is
  choosing one particular type of encryption to be recommended.
  
  Otherwise, choose either TLS encryption or SSL encryption[,] as
  recommended by your email provider.
  
- 
- The same sentence appears twice on p. 61, later appearing in "Setting up a POP connection". This report applies to both.
+ The same sentence appears twice on p. 61, later appearing in "Setting up
+ a POP connection", and then again on p. 62 in "Setting up your Sending
+ options". This report applies to all three.

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Comma suggestion, pp.61-62
https://bugs.launchpad.net/bugs/586332
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Status in Ubuntu Manual: New

Bug description:
Rev. 788
Ch. 3; §§ "Setting up an IMAP connection", "Setting up a POP connection" p. 61 (PDF p. 63); § "Setting up your Sending options", p. 62 (PDF p. 64)
Type: resolving ambiguity

A comma in the following helps indicate that the recommendation is from the provider, preventing the misinterpretation that the reader is choosing one particular type of encryption to be recommended.

Otherwise, choose either TLS encryption or SSL encryption[,] as recommended by your email provider.

The same sentence appears twice on p. 61, later appearing in "Setting up a POP connection", and then again on p. 62 in "Setting up your Sending options". This report applies to all three.