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[Bug 584619] Re: On page 8, 'Ubuntu desktop' should be either capitalized or reworded
** Changed in: ubuntu-manual
Status: In Progress => Fix Committed
On page 8, 'Ubuntu desktop' should be either capitalized or reworded
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Status in Ubuntu Manual: Fix Committed
Chapter and page number: Prologue, p. 8 (p. 10 of the PDF)
The second sentence of the last paragraph of the 'brief history' section sounds awkward: "As of 2010, Ubuntu desktop is installed on nearly 2% [...]". There are several possible solutions: 'Ubuntu desktop' could be reworded ('the Ubuntu desktop'? 'the Ubuntu desktop system'?) or 'desktop' could be capitalized.