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** Changed in: ubuntu-manual
     Assignee: (unassigned) => Kevin Godby (godbyk)

** Changed in: ubuntu-manual
       Status: New => In Progress

** Changed in: ubuntu-manual
    Milestone: None => edition-2

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P.9: Comma needed before "called GNOME"
https://bugs.launchpad.net/bugs/584964
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Status in Ubuntu Manual: In Progress

Bug description:
Rev. 788
Prologue: What is Linux? section (p.9, PDF p.11)
Type: grammar

Final sentence needs a comma:
"and uses one of the more popular graphical desktop environments[,] called GNOME."
Without it the sentence suggests that there are several desktop environments called GNOME; ignoring versions, there's only one, isn't there?