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[Bug 585465] Re: Comma needed on page 152 for consistence


** Changed in: ubuntu-manual
     Assignee: (unassigned) => Kevin Godby (godbyk)

** Changed in: ubuntu-manual
       Status: New => In Progress

** Changed in: ubuntu-manual
    Milestone: None => edition-2

Comma needed on page 152 for consistence
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Bug description:
A comma after the abbreviation "e.g." is needed, because everywhere the american notation (with comma) is used except here:
(e.g. Japan)
Page 152, item (d), line 7

Except as otherwise agreed in writing by the Licensor or as may be
otherwise permied by applicable law, if You Reproduce, Distribute or
Publicly Perform the Work either by itself or as part of any Adaptations
or Collections, You must not distort, mutilate, modify or take other
derogatory action in relation to the Work whi would be prejudicial to
the Original Author’s honor or reputation. Licensor agrees that in those
jurisdictions (e.g. Japan), in whi any exercise of the right granted in
Section (b) of this License (the right to make Adaptations) would be
deemed to be a distortion, mutilation, modification or other derogatory
action prejudicial to the Original Author’s honor and reputation, the
Licensor will waive or not assert, as appropriate, this Section, to the
fullest extent permied by the applicable national law, to enable You to
reasonably exercise Your right under Section (b) of this License (right
to make Adaptations) but not otherwise.

Even in other parts of the license there is always a comma (e.g., two times on page 151, item (c))

Revision number:  Revision date: -- :: -