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[Bug 584573] Re: "Laptop computers commonly use Wi-Fi due to their portability"

 

** Changed in: ubuntu-manual
       Status: In Progress => Fix Committed

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"Laptop computers commonly use Wi-Fi due to their portability"
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Status in Ubuntu Manual: Fix Committed

Bug description:
Chapter 3, Paragraph 3, sentence 2: "Laptop computers com-
monly use Wi-Fi due to their portability,"

This sounds ambiguous (to me), one might ask if some portable laptop computers cannot use a wired connection due to their portability.

I suggest they "...due to its portability" (i.e. Wi-Fi's portability)", "...commonly use Wi-Fi to take advantage of their portability", or simply "...for portability".