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[Bug 585364] Re: Comma splice on p.33


This has been fixed in the second edition. Thanks!

** Changed in: ubuntu-manual
       Status: In Progress => Fix Committed

Comma splice on p.33
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Status in Ubuntu Manual: Fix Committed

Bug description:
Rev. 788
Ch. 2, § "Panels", p. 33 (PDF p. 35)
Type: grammar

Manual has a comma splice (before "however")
By default these buttons will display directional arrows, however, you can select the Arrows on hide buttons option to remove the arrows and just have plain buttons.

Replace "however," with "though" or "but"
Replace comma with full stop or a semicolon.