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[Bug 585446] Re: "Signal meter" missing "a" on p.46


Thanks! I've fixed this for the second edition.

** Changed in: ubuntu-manual
       Status: In Progress => Fix Committed

"Signal meter" missing "a" on p.46
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Status in Ubuntu Manual: Fix Committed

Bug description:
Rev. 788
Ch. 3, § "Connecting to a wireless network for the first time", p. 46 (PDF p. 48)
Type: grammar

"A" needed before "signal meter":
[...] if it connects successfully will then change to display [a] signal meter.

Might also be better as two separate sentences:
The NetworkManager icon in the top panel will animate as Ubuntu attempts to establish a connection. If it connects successfully, the icon will change to display a signal meter.