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Message #00838
[Bug 585288] Re: Comma splice on p.18
** Changed in: ubuntu-manual
Status: Fix Committed => Fix Released
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Comma splice on p.18
https://bugs.launchpad.net/bugs/585288
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Status in Ubuntu Manual: Fix Released
Bug description:
Rev. 788
Ch. 1, § "Enter your details", p.18 (PDF p.20)
Type: grammar
Manual has a comma splice (before "however"):
You will be able to continue the installation process regardless of your password strength, however, for security reasons it is best to choose a strong one.
This could be corrected with a semicolon or full stop, but "but" would keep it single-sentenced:
You will be able to continue the installation process regardless of your password strength, but for security reasons it is best to choose a strong one.
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