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[Bug 584658] Re: Poor sentence structure on page 12
** Changed in: ubuntu-manual
Status: Fix Committed => Fix Released
Poor sentence structure on page 12
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Status in Ubuntu Manual: Fix Released
Chapter and page number: 1, page 12 (page 14 of the PDF)
The first sentence of the second paragraph under 'The Live CD' reads, "The speed at which your computer can read information from a CD is much slower than reading information from a hard drive". The sentence structure is a bit off; a better alternative would be "The speed at which your computer can read information from a CD is much slower than that at which it can read information from a hard drive".