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[Benjamin Humphrey <humphreybc@xxxxxxxxx>]

^^

This is what Joe Burgess, Thomas Cantera and I came up with in the
meeting on Saturday. See the logs for more detail.

Basically we think we've got a Table of Contents that covers everything
we presently have, and some more. It's not too long, it's not too
confusing and it gets harder as it advances.

Thoughts from everyone please?

** Changed in: ubuntu-manual
       Status: Confirmed => In Progress

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Ordering of content might need some tweaking
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Status in Ubuntu Manual: In Progress

Bug description:
I have been taking a look at our current TOC and am wondering whether it needs to be tweaked slightly. My concern is that we will be asking users to open a terminal and type commands within the first six chapters, however it is not until chapter 7 that we have an 'introduction to the terminal' that explains what it is and what sudo means etc. This doesn't make sense to me and could be confusing/offputting to a beginner.

My suggestion is this:

1. Rename chapter 6 to simply "Updates and Upgrades", and remove the section on "system maintenance".
2. Rename chapter 7 to "System Maintenance", and make the content on system maintenance (that was in chapter 6) a new subsection of chapter 7, following the 'introduction to the terminal' subsection.

That way, I think we could almost get away with not using the command line at all for the entire first part of the manual, as it's mostly gui-based stuff. Then when the reader gets to part II - advanced, the first thing they read is an introduction to the terminal.

Hope that all made sense. Anyone have any other suggestions?