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[ilya haykinson <haykinson@xxxxxxxxx>]

Patch applied, as per Benjamin's comments in IRC.

** Changed in: ubuntu-manual
       Status: New => Fix Released

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Some style changes to the prologue
https://bugs.launchpad.net/bugs/508951
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Status in Ubuntu Manual: Fix Released

Bug description:
Attached is a patch for some style change suggestions to the prologue:

 - changed instances of "Ubuntu Manual Team" and related instances to "we", and introduced the team as "we"
 - changed passive voice into active voice in a few places
 - added some line  breaks in long lines
 - changed "hundreds of thousands" to "millions" (of Ubuntu users), which is more accurate