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Re: [Bug 545983] Re: Something is not right in page 124

 

On 24 March 2010 15:21, Uli Tillich <utillich@xxxxxxxxx> wrote:
> I am not a native speaker, but I think the way you phrased it, it
> changes the meaning. Though it might be matter of debate which meaning
> is closer to the "truth". Giving everyone admin rights is probably less
> work until something goes wrong, then its a lot more work...

Saying "To make administration easier, do not give administration
privileges to all users." is the correct way in terms of grammar and
it is easy to understand.

> I would suggest something along the line of:
>
> Giving all users administration rights might seem to make administration
> easier, but is generally not a good idea for security reasons.

A reader would then ask "what security reasons?". Do you really need
or want to explain them? The original sentence was sufficient once
grammatically corrected.

Simon

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Something is not right in page 124
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Bug description:
In page 124 we have: 

"...Do not give administration privileges to all users to make administration
easier."

I think that there's something wrong with that, it should be: 

"To make administration easier, do not give administration privileges to all users."

What do you think?





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