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[Bug 584636] Re: Awkward wording on page 10 under contact details

 

removed "freely" altogether; that's clear given "contributed"

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       Status: New => In Progress

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Awkward wording on page 10 under contact details
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Bug description:
Version: 788
Chapter and page number: Prologue, p. 10 (p. 12 of the PDF)
Type: style/grammar

The first line under 'Contact details' reads "Many people have contributed their time freely [...]". This sounds a little awkward; perhaps "Many people have freely contributed their time" would be an improvement.





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