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[Bug 584630] Re: Missing comma on page 9

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From: ilya haykinson <haykinson@xxxxxxxxx>
Date: Sun, 23 May 2010 22:08:19 -0000
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** Changed in: ubuntu-manual
       Status: New => In Progress

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Missing comma on page 9
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Bug description:
Version: 788
Chapter and page number: Prologue, p. 9 (p. 11 of the PDF)
Type: punctuation/grammar

In the last sentence of the first bullet point under 'Is Ubuntu right for you?', there should be a comma after guide, i.e. "near the end of the guide[,] we include a troubleshooting chapter".

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[Bug 584630] [NEW] Missing comma on page 9
From: Mandy Zhou, 2010-05-23