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[Sylvie Gallet <sylvie.gallet@xxxxxxx>]

Hi Hannie,

> I have changed the Launcher screenshot to a marginscreenshot. Please
> have a look at Revision 144 to see if you like it better this way.
> Sylvie, Carsten, could you also have a look at it, please? If you do not
> like it, let me know and I will revert it.

  I like it, and I think 02-Launcher-triangles.png would also look 
better as a marginscreenshot, but the caption and the marginnote about 
application in the foreground are too long, I think the caption should 
be shortened and maybe the marginnote could be moved to the main text?

  Greetings,

        - Sylvie