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Public bug reported:

1.The description in manual is as below：
"Use virtual networking services among devices that are managed by the OpenStack Compute service....Enables users to associate IP address blocks and other network configuration settings with an OpenStack Networking network. "

Because "Use" is used by the first sentence and it is imperative
sentence, "Enables" in the last sentence is not correct. I think it
should be "Enable".

2.The description in same location as above  is as below：
"The Networking (neutron) API v2.0 combines the API v1.1 functionality with some essential Internet Protocol Address Management (IPAM) functionality." 

Because "some" is used and i think "some" here does not mean "certain",
the last "functionality" should be "functionalities".

3.The description in same location as above  is as below:
"Enables users to associate IP address blocks and other network configuration settings with an OpenStack Networking network. You can choose a specific IP address from the block or let OpenStack Networking choose the first available IP address. "

Acorrding to the context, the "block" in the last sentence should be
"blocks".

** Affects: neutron
     Importance: Undecided
     Assignee: zhangjingwen (zhangjingwen)
         Status: New

** Changed in: neutron
     Assignee: (unassigned) => zhangjingwen (zhangjingwen)

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Title:
  Grammar misses in manual “Networking API v2.0 (CURRENT)”

Status in neutron:
  New

Bug description:
  1.The description in manual is as below：
  "Use virtual networking services among devices that are managed by the OpenStack Compute service....Enables users to associate IP address blocks and other network configuration settings with an OpenStack Networking network. "

  Because "Use" is used by the first sentence and it is imperative
  sentence, "Enables" in the last sentence is not correct. I think it
  should be "Enable".

  2.The description in same location as above  is as below：
  "The Networking (neutron) API v2.0 combines the API v1.1 functionality with some essential Internet Protocol Address Management (IPAM) functionality." 

  Because "some" is used and i think "some" here does not mean
  "certain", the last "functionality" should be "functionalities".

  3.The description in same location as above  is as below:
  "Enables users to associate IP address blocks and other network configuration settings with an OpenStack Networking network. You can choose a specific IP address from the block or let OpenStack Networking choose the first available IP address. "

  Acorrding to the context, the "block" in the last sentence should be
  "blocks".

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