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Reviewed:  https://review.openstack.org/256062
Committed: https://git.openstack.org/cgit/openstack/horizon/commit/?id=37285b8569bca13f4087b0dff996a9a4b342cf02
Submitter: Jenkins
Branch:    master

commit 37285b8569bca13f4087b0dff996a9a4b342cf02
Author: Gudrun Wolfgram <gmolson@xxxxxxxxxx>
Date:   Thu Dec 10 12:42:54 2015 -0600

    Improve readability of Horizon Packaging doc
    
    Include various changes for readability. Make bulleted list parallel.
    Shorten long sentences. In some cases include articles and clarify
    subject in sentences. Spell out "for example." Eliminate redundant
    words / phrases. Per Matthias's recommendation, shuffle order of topics
    and create two sections to focus first on general packaging principles,
    and then Horizon specifics.
    
    Change-Id: Ic864dd926d723c6dc9749249655ae2e7d08ed225
    Co-Authored-By: Matthias Runge <mrunge@xxxxxxxxxx>
    Closes-Bug: #1516986


** Changed in: horizon
       Status: In Progress => Fix Released

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https://bugs.launchpad.net/bugs/1516986

Title:
  Grammar/ phrasing cleanup on packaging docs

Status in OpenStack Dashboard (Horizon):
  Fix Released

Bug description:
  There were a few outstanding nits on the phrasing used in the
  packaging doc: doc/source/topics/packaging.rst

  The relevant review is here: https://review.openstack.org/#/c/228423/

  There should be addressed with a second pass over the document.

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