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Re: Update documentation (issue 6945058)

 

LGTM with a few minors.

Thanks for the update, and handling the questions on IRC.


https://codereview.appspot.com/6945058/diff/1/HACKING.txt
File HACKING.txt (right):

https://codereview.appspot.com/6945058/diff/1/HACKING.txt#newcode98
HACKING.txt:98: Unfortunately, we have not found LXC-based Juju
environments to be reliable
Two paragraphs in a row starting with the same word is a little awkward;
I think the 'Unfortunately' in the second paragraph may be unnecessary
("Currently, running...is quite slow, however, ...")

https://codereview.appspot.com/6945058/diff/1/README.txt
File README.txt (right):

https://codereview.appspot.com/6945058/diff/1/README.txt#newcode73
README.txt:73: when run withing the charm, the GUI appears to not be
connecting properly to
s/withing/within

https://codereview.appspot.com/6945058/

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