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Trusty, 14.04

I worked through the series files, 8 in total I think. Here's what I
ended up with on the particular file:

*****
 Adding your accounts brings a choice of services like calendar, chat, and 
 e-mail straight to your desktop, making services a seamless part of your 
user experience. By adding accounts, you can keep in touch with services of
different accounts, like chats, at the same time. Just set your account once
and every time you start your computer all the accounts and services you've
added will be ready for you.
*****

I'll be submitting the the files to lp as a merge proposal in the next
day or so.

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Title:
  accounts-whyadd.page grammar fixes

Status in “ubuntu-docs” package in Ubuntu:
  In Progress

Bug description:
  GIVEN:
  Adding your accounts brings your choice of services like calendar, chat and e-mail straight to your desktop and makes the information of the services a seamless part of your user experience. By adding accounts you can easily keep in touch with services of different accounts, like chats, at the same time. Just set your account once and every time you start your computer all the accounts and services you've added are ready for you.

  I think it needs a lot more commas to facilitate reading.

  PROPOSED:
  Adding your accounts brings your choice of services like calendar, chat, and e-mail straight to your desktop.  It also makes the information of the services a seamless part of your user experience. By adding accounts, you can easily keep in touch with services of different accounts, like chats, at the same time. Just set your account once, and every time you start your computer, all the accounts and services you've added are ready for you.

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