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Message #00472
[Bug 1220971] Re: accounts-create.page simplify a phrase
** Branch linked: lp:ubuntu/trusty-proposed/ubuntu-docs
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https://bugs.launchpad.net/bugs/1220971
Title:
accounts-create.page simplify a phrase
Status in “ubuntu-docs” package in Ubuntu:
Fix Committed
Bug description:
There is the note under Step #5:
"...If this is true of the service you wish to register, you will need to use an alternative method to create an account."
s/is true of/applies to
Sounds more direct that way.
Another one.
"You will typically be asked for some personal details such as username and password."
Suggestion: You will be asked for your username and password.
Conciseness.
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