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[John Kim <johnkim.ubuntu@xxxxxxxxx>]

Public bug reported:

There is the note under Step #5:

"...If this is true of the service you wish to register, you will need to use an alternative method to create an account."
s/is true of/applies to
Sounds more direct that way.

Another one.

"You will typically be asked for some personal details such as username and password."
Suggestion: You will be asked for your username and password.
Conciseness.

** Affects: ubuntu-docs (Ubuntu)
     Importance: Undecided
         Status: New


** Tags: bitesize saucy

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https://bugs.launchpad.net/bugs/1220971

Title:
  accounts-create.page simplify a phrase

Status in “ubuntu-docs” package in Ubuntu:
  New

Bug description:
  There is the note under Step #5:

  "...If this is true of the service you wish to register, you will need to use an alternative method to create an account."
  s/is true of/applies to
  Sounds more direct that way.

  Another one.

  "You will typically be asked for some personal details such as username and password."
  Suggestion: You will be asked for your username and password.
  Conciseness.

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