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Re: Draft 2.2.0 Specs.

 

You want me to make the changes in the .odf file?

On Fri, Jun 10, 2011 at 16:44, Timothy Cook <timothywayne.cook@xxxxxxxxx> wrote:
> Hi Roger,
>
> Thanks again for your participation and comments.
> I too do not like the order of the way the classes are listed.
>
> I REALLY need to complete the work on the CDD re-validation with the specs.
> It would be awesome for the project if you would make your suggested
> changes and commit them.
>
> I do not believe that it is good for only one person to be the developer.
>
> bzr branch lp:mlhim-specs
>
> Please feel free to make your changes.
>
> Cheers,
> Tim
>
>
> On Thu, Jun 9, 2011 at 6:52 PM, Roger Erens <roger.erens@xxxxxxxxx> wrote:
>> Hi Tim,
>>
>> good work! Some quick suggestions:
>> 1) left-aligning the text instead of justifying makes the pages look a
>> little restless in my opinion
>> 2) since it's a reference manual, I would choose to list the classes
>> in the packages in alphabetical order
>> 3) the analogy between Lego and MLHIM approach: I would compare the
>> Reference Model with (info in) the catalog of all the Lego-bricks used
>> in a Lego-product line (e.g. Star Wars) (so not a catalog of *all*
>> Lego-bricks ever produced). Then the actual Lego-bricks from this
>> product line (cf Healthcare domain) are instantiations of the info in
>> the catalog. The bricks are analogous to the actual data-items, that
>> have to be bound to the toy-model (archetype). At least, this is how I
>> would improve the analogy in the openEHR docs, where I long time
>> believed the actual data-items were instantiations of
>> archetype-classes ,where those archetype-classes were created at
>> design-time instead of run-time.
>>
>> Cheers,
>>
>> Roger
>>
>> On Thu, Jun 9, 2011 at 20:33, Timothy Cook <timothywayne.cook@xxxxxxxxx> wrote:
>>> Hi All,
>>>
>>>
>>> I have uploaded a PDF of the draft 2.2.0 specs to
>>> http://www.mlhim.org/mlhim-2.0/mlhim-ref-man-2.0.x-enUS.pdf/view
>>>
>>> I would appreciate it if some of you would read through it quickly and
>>> see if you find any glaring errors or subtle bugs.
>>>
>>> It is only 74 pages at this point so not too tough to scan.
>>>
>>> Thanks,
>>> Tim
>>>
>>>
>>>
>>>
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