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[Wesley Stout <wesleystout@xxxxxxxxx>]

I think the beaten to beat is a UK/US thing I'm more than happy to change it
back :) if you so desire!

On Thu, Mar 31, 2011 at 7:48 AM, Jonathan Corwin <j@xxxxxxxxxxxx> wrote:

> Review: Needs Fixing
> Glad to see my 5 minute written quickly "About" is getting some needed
> improvements :)
>
> Line 43: veriety
> Line 44: attractvie
> Line 51: Change "even on" to "including?" (yes I know I'm correcting my own
> text here!)
> Line 54: Why have you changed "beaten" to "beat"? Or is this a UK/US
> difference in language?
>
> Line 79/80. Too many want's. Change the second to 'would like' perhaps? And
> 94/95
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