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[Scott Testerman <t.scott.testerman@xxxxxxxxx>]

Public bug reported:

Binary package hint: ubiquity-slideshow-ubuntu

The last sentence on the "Getting Help with Ubuntu" slide is a comma
splice.

"The installation will finish soon, we hope that you enjoy using
Ubuntu!"

These two independent clauses should either be joined by a semicolon
("The installation will finish soon; we hope that you enjoy using
Ubuntu!") or split into two complete sentences ("The installation will
finish soon.  We hope that you enjoy using Ubuntu!").

** Affects: ubiquity-slideshow-ubuntu (Ubuntu)
     Importance: Undecided
         Status: New

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Comma splice in Getting Help with Ubuntu slide
https://bugs.launchpad.net/bugs/428652
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Status in “ubiquity-slideshow-ubuntu” package in Ubuntu: New

Bug description:
Binary package hint: ubiquity-slideshow-ubuntu

The last sentence on the "Getting Help with Ubuntu" slide is a comma splice.

"The installation will finish soon, we hope that you enjoy using Ubuntu!"

These two independent clauses should either be joined by a semicolon ("The installation will finish soon; we hope that you enjoy using Ubuntu!") or split into two complete sentences ("The installation will finish soon.  We hope that you enjoy using Ubuntu!").