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[Andrew <rugby471@xxxxxxxxx>]

Public bug reported:

the below sentence is a bit messed up. By this I mean that the beginning of each item is different for each item and too confusing.
The last item seems to miss of 'have' and because the first item is a negative, the second and third positive items seem confusing. Pl


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** Affects: ubuntu-manual
     Importance: Undecided
         Status: New

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List of three is messed up (page 12)
https://bugs.launchpad.net/bugs/584465
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Status in Ubuntu Manual: New

Bug description:
the below sentence is a bit messed up. By this I mean that the beginning of each item is different for each item and too confusing.
The last item seems to miss of 'have' and because the first item is a negative, the second and third positive items seem confusing. Pl


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becomes

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