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[Mark Hepworth <hepworth.mark@xxxxxxxxxxxxxx>]

Public bug reported:

788

Chp 6 p120

Ubuntu uses the Linux file system structure based on a series of folders in
the root directory.

Not ungrammatical as such, but awkward, needing a separation between "Linux file system structure" and "based on". Also "system structure" is a bit redundant. 
Suggestion: "Ubuntu uses the Linux file system, which is based on a series of folders in the root directory."

** Affects: ubuntu-manual
     Importance: Undecided
         Status: New

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Grammar improvement required
https://bugs.launchpad.net/bugs/584492
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Status in Ubuntu Manual: New

Bug description:
788

Chp 6 p120

Ubuntu uses the Linux file system structure based on a series of folders in
the root directory.

Not ungrammatical as such, but awkward, needing a separation between "Linux file system structure" and "based on". Also "system structure" is a bit redundant. 
Suggestion: "Ubuntu uses the Linux file system, which is based on a series of folders in the root directory."