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** Changed in: ubuntu-manual
       Status: New => Confirmed

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Comma consistency, p.60
https://bugs.launchpad.net/bugs/586316
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Status in Ubuntu Manual: Confirmed

Bug description:
Rev. 788
Ch. 3, § "Running Evolution for the first time", p. 60 (PDF p. 62)
Type: consistency

Almost every paragraph in this section starts with a time indication followed by a comma. But the second paragraph does not follow suit:
When Evolution starts[,] you should see the “Evolution Setup Assistant” window, welcoming you to Evolution. 

Aside from consistency, a comma here helps indicate that "starts" is being used as the intransitive rather than transitive verb "to start", helping machine translations and less able readers.