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[Bug 584488] Re: Overcomplicated sentence


** Changed in: ubuntu-manual
       Status: In Progress => Fix Committed

Overcomplicated sentence
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Status in Ubuntu Manual: Fix Committed

Bug description:
Chp 6 p123

"Apt is extremely versatile and encompasses several tools, however, the most commonly used apt tool is apt-get."

An overcomplicated sentence. Simplify: "Apt is extremely versatile and include several tools, the most commonly used of which is apt-get."