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Message #00907
[Bug 584488] Re: Overcomplicated sentence
** Changed in: ubuntu-manual
Status: Fix Committed => Fix Released
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Overcomplicated sentence
https://bugs.launchpad.net/bugs/584488
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Status in Ubuntu Manual: Fix Released
Bug description:
Chp 6 p123
"Apt is extremely versatile and encompasses several tools, however, the most commonly used apt tool is apt-get."
An overcomplicated sentence. Simplify: "Apt is extremely versatile and include several tools, the most commonly used of which is apt-get."