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[Bug 584455] Re: Comma neded (page 9)


The 'and' is strong enough to adjoin microcomputers and cellphones.  The
comma disrupts the 'from...to' phrase.

Can you cite a grammar rule that suggests a comma is required?

** Changed in: ubuntu-manual
       Status: New => Incomplete

** Changed in: ubuntu-manual
   Importance: Undecided => Low

** Changed in: ubuntu-manual
     Assignee: (unassigned) => Kevin Godby (godbyk)

** Changed in: ubuntu-manual
    Milestone: None => edition-2

** Changed in: ubuntu-manual
       Status: Incomplete => Invalid

Comma neded (page 9)
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Status in Ubuntu Manual: Invalid

Bug description:
There should be a comma before 'cellphones' on page 9, as micro-computers and cellphones are grouped together (small devices)

One of the benefits of Linux is that it is incredibly flexible
and can be configured to run on almost any device—from the smallest micro-
computers and cellphones[,] to larger super-computers.