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[Kevin Godby <godbyk@xxxxxxxxx>]

While the original text is a bit awkward, it does emphasis that there
are some major differences (as opposed to slight differences).  Can we
rephrase the sentence to maintain that emphasis?

** Changed in: ubuntu-manual
     Assignee: (unassigned) => Kevin Godby (godbyk)

** Changed in: ubuntu-manual
    Milestone: None => edition-2

** Changed in: ubuntu-manual
   Importance: Undecided => Low

** Changed in: ubuntu-manual
       Status: New => In Progress

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Rephrase "some things that work very differently" (page 9)
https://bugs.launchpad.net/bugs/584460
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Status in Ubuntu Manual: In Progress

Bug description:
In the below sentence, "some things that work very differently" should be rephrased to "differences". As well as this being the antonym of the word previously used (similarities) it is a lot less confusing and simpler.

You will no doubt notice many similarities to both Microsoft Windows and Mac OSX, as well as some things that work very differently.

becomes

You will no doubt notice many similarities to both Microsoft Windows and Mac OSX, as well as some differences.