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[Bug 584459] Re: Move however to start of sentence (page 9)

 

I think it's fine where it is.  Having the introductory phrase remark on
the time period keeps the focus in line with the history we're telling.


** Changed in: ubuntu-manual
       Status: New => Invalid

** Changed in: ubuntu-manual
   Importance: Undecided => Low

** Changed in: ubuntu-manual
     Assignee: (unassigned) => Kevin Godby (godbyk)

** Changed in: ubuntu-manual
    Milestone: None => edition-2

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Move however to start of sentence (page 9)
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Bug description:
Move however to the start of the sentence


In the past decade, however, graphical user interfaces have come a long way in terms of usability,
reliability and appearance

becomes 

However, in the past decade, graphical user interfaces have come a long way in terms of usability,
reliability and appearance