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[Bug 584492] Re: Grammar improvement required


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** Changed in: ubuntu-manual
   Importance: Undecided => Low

** Changed in: ubuntu-manual
       Status: New => Fix Committed

** Changed in: ubuntu-manual
    Milestone: None => edition-2

** Changed in: ubuntu-manual
     Assignee: (unassigned) => Elan Kugelmass (epkugelmass)

Grammar improvement required
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Status in Ubuntu Manual: Confirmed

Bug description:

Chp 6 p120

Ubuntu uses the Linux file system structure based on a series of folders in
the root directory.

Not ungrammatical as such, but awkward, needing a separation between "Linux file system structure" and "based on". Also "system structure" is a bit redundant. 
Suggestion: "Ubuntu uses the Linux file system, which is based on a series of folders in the root directory."